Wednesday, June 10, 2009

>There was a time when I couldn’t go on,

when nothing was right and all were gone.

I stared at nothingness with no will to fight,

I have to give up, I know I was right.

Everybody seems to desert me’coz no one was left,

Nobody heard me, to my shouts they were deaf.

How could I go on, how could I stay?

When they were all gone, when they all went away.

Life was empty, it was dark and cold,

Who will warm me to life? To my hands who will hold?

Who will push me when I’m tired? Who will catch me when I fall?

Who will listen to my woes? Who will answer when I call?

No one will ‘coz no one stayed,

They all went away, they all have fade.

It was a time when my life was black,

but you came along and you help me come back.

You taught me to love again,

you taught me to live again.

You were all smiles and soft tender words,

You freed me from my murky past, freed me like a bird.

I came across this poem today, i just though this is nice to have it posted here and share.

I would like to dedicate this one also to my husband,lover,mentor and best friend. Thank you for being always there for me. Thank you for the guidance,prayers, patience and understanding for my mood swings.

This is not my Father's day tribute yet,lol. I LOVE YOU!


  1. Nice poem lolit.
    Your husband is a very lucky man.
    Best wishes to you both.

  2. What a great poem. :) Glad you and your husband are happy.

  3. your thoughts on your new found relation reflects your happiness and are indeed like a bird that has mustered all the courage and strength to soar higher and higher and attain new heights. soar through rough weather and still fly out in colors daring the odds. soar through the harsh sun & darkness yet care for your siblings. ensdure the pain through rain ans strom yet endlessly plan your journey with hopes and aspiration to see a new horizon where you can sing your love songs, share your feelings and have your smile. may all your dreams come true and may your flight keep you on track and soon reach your much dreamt & awaited destination. may the lord shower all his blessings on you and make your dream come true.

    just a small word for you.

    love hime like he loves you (without inhibition or strings attached) and he will sure love you more.

  4. What a great poem..aren't we lucky to have
    such great husbands??
    fondly, Deena

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  6. touching poem...i am soooooooo happy for is so rare in today's world...and you deserve the best...

    take care
    keep smiling...

  7. Thanks! :) I love the green honeydew melons, they are so sweet and refreshing. A perfect summer treat.

    I hope you have a marvelous weekend!

  8. Loved the poem and the dedication.


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